Saturday, January 1, 2011

غزل


Couple of years back, I wrote this poem; Gazal as we call it in Urdu. I thought why not to share it with you all.

Please Do comment and do let me know of my shortcomings :-D


غزل

جذبوں کی لہروں میں جب

آتش کے سحروں میں جب


دل کا ہر اک کانچ ٹوٹا

سپنوں کے شہروں میں جب


دییوں کا تیل بھی سوکھا

اندھیروں کے پہروں میں جب


کیوں اک شیطان بھی ڈوبا

نوروں کی نہروں میں جب


یوں ہوئی پہچان بھی جھوٹی

اپنوں کے کہروں میں جب


کہاں گئی، کیوں رونق ڈوبی

خوابوں کے چہروں میں جب


ہاں شیری جاں سی نکلی

شکر کے زہروں میں جب

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13 comments:

  1. AsmaJanuary 2, 2011 at 12:02 AM

    wa ji kia baat hai ...very deep..u are a very sensitive person........:)

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  2. ShariJanuary 2, 2011 at 12:08 AM

    Lolz really a sensitive person? Thanks for liking it. :-D

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  3. farahJanuary 2, 2011 at 6:46 PM

    waaah :) mi like it

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  4. ShariJanuary 2, 2011 at 11:45 PM

    @ Thanks a lot. :-D

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 4, 2011 at 3:13 PM

    its really nice poem...
    can u share if u have more...

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  6. ShariJanuary 4, 2011 at 6:14 PM

    Thanks Anonymous. I'll keep on sharing with passage of time. :-D

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  7. AtiqJanuary 7, 2011 at 12:38 PM

    Wonderfull Gazzal. very nice

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  8. ShariJanuary 10, 2011 at 6:11 PM

    @ Atiq :-D

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  9. TauqeerJanuary 25, 2011 at 11:23 AM

    It is very deep indeed, I am still figuring out what it actually meant :D

    Good work nonetheless.

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  10. ShariJanuary 25, 2011 at 4:47 PM

    @Tauqeer

    Thanks a lot

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  11. AnonymousJanuary 31, 2011 at 11:25 PM

    Nice one, truly speaking, I read it three times then complete meaning came into my mind.... :)
    Keep it up and Stay Blessed

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  12. ShariFebruary 1, 2011 at 2:36 PM

    @ Asma Khan

    Thanks and keep visiting :-D

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  13. AdminFebruary 6, 2011 at 12:02 AM

    very deep very nice

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