Monday, January 31, 2011

Second Chance

Today I went to home of fun
Happiness was there, shining like sun

I wanted to shine, I wanted to run
I wanted to feel, like I had won

But life is cruel, It kills like gun
A wake up call, my sins were ton

It was too shocking, I was stun
I wanted another chance but it was shun

Nobody is perfect, not even nun
Why was I told, my  life was done

Mentally tortured, My life was spun
I'll not give up, I'll score home run
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20 comments:

  1. AmritJanuary 31, 2011 at 6:42 AM

    Beautiful poem.

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  2. padmajaJanuary 31, 2011 at 7:20 AM

    Hope and faith wins one day with patience, Talha,inspiring thoughts!
    Thanks for your visit and feed back!

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  3. Rama AnanthJanuary 31, 2011 at 10:24 AM

    You seem to be in a poetic yet sad mood. Hope things brighten up for you. Keep the faith.

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  4. ShariJanuary 31, 2011 at 2:54 PM

    @ A

    Thanks :-D

    @ Padmaja

    Nice words thanks and please keep visiting :-D

    @Rama

    Well sometimes when one is feeling low and decide to pick up the pen. Result is some what shown above. Thanks for feedback and keep visiting :-D

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  5. DeepikaJanuary 31, 2011 at 3:29 PM

    another chance is not given to everyone. but when u get it, we must never let it go waste. all the best with life.

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  6. ShariJanuary 31, 2011 at 4:58 PM

    @ Deepika

    Thanks and point taken

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  7. subuJanuary 31, 2011 at 8:08 PM

    Nothing succedes like success, so don't give up! Thank you and Keep visiting..

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  8. A Great LiarJanuary 31, 2011 at 9:53 PM

    Love the flow of it. Inspiring and simply put. Well done

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  9. AsmaFebruary 1, 2011 at 12:15 AM

    well,,,it never too late as long as you have the spirit to make things right:)

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  10. ShariFebruary 1, 2011 at 2:34 PM

    @ Sabu

    Thanks and keep visiting.

    @ A Great Liar

    Very nice words thanks a lot.

    @ Asma

    :-D

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  11. dr.antonyFebruary 1, 2011 at 6:52 PM

    Cheer up,friend ! If life gives you lemons,make lemonade ! We change,and the world will follow.

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  12. ShariFebruary 1, 2011 at 7:37 PM

    @ dr.antony

    thanks your words meant a lot. keep visiting :-D

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  13. R. RameshFebruary 1, 2011 at 8:35 PM

    cheers boss

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  14. AshaFebruary 2, 2011 at 8:54 AM

    Excellent play with words and loaded with meaning as well.

    Thanks for your thought on my blog.

    Cheers!!!

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  15. ShariFebruary 2, 2011 at 10:48 PM

    @ R. Ramesh

    Thanks :-D

    @ Asha

    Thanks for your kind words. Keep visiting. :-D

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  16. SarahFebruary 6, 2011 at 1:36 PM

    Very simple yet, deep in its message!

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  17. ShariFebruary 8, 2011 at 11:46 AM

    @ Sarah

    Thanks a lot. It meant a lot to me. Please keep visiting. :-D

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  18. FatimaFebruary 8, 2011 at 10:25 PM

    It's a simple poem yet it means a lot!
    Life doesn't always give us a second chance and if you've got one, you're really lucky don't let it go !

    Hope that things get better soon !

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  19. ShariFebruary 9, 2011 at 11:59 AM

    @ Fatima

    Thanks a lot :-D and keep visiting.

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  20. Noor-ul-Ain HanifMarch 15, 2011 at 1:20 PM

    Excellent :)

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