Monday, January 31, 2011

Second Chance

Today I went to home of fun
Happiness was there, shining like sun

I wanted to shine, I wanted to run
I wanted to feel, like I had won

But life is cruel, It kills like gun
A wake up call, my sins were ton

It was too shocking, I was stun
I wanted another chance but it was shun

Nobody is perfect, not even nun
Why was I told, my  life was done

Mentally tortured, My life was spun
I'll not give up, I'll score home run

20 comments:

  1. Hope and faith wins one day with patience, Talha,inspiring thoughts!
    Thanks for your visit and feed back!

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  2. You seem to be in a poetic yet sad mood. Hope things brighten up for you. Keep the faith.

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  3. @ A

    Thanks :-D

    @ Padmaja

    Nice words thanks and please keep visiting :-D

    @Rama

    Well sometimes when one is feeling low and decide to pick up the pen. Result is some what shown above. Thanks for feedback and keep visiting :-D

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  4. another chance is not given to everyone. but when u get it, we must never let it go waste. all the best with life.

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  5. @ Deepika

    Thanks and point taken

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  6. Nothing succedes like success, so don't give up! Thank you and Keep visiting..

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  7. Love the flow of it. Inspiring and simply put. Well done

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  8. well,,,it never too late as long as you have the spirit to make things right:)

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  9. @ Sabu

    Thanks and keep visiting.

    @ A Great Liar

    Very nice words thanks a lot.

    @ Asma

    :-D

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  10. Cheer up,friend ! If life gives you lemons,make lemonade ! We change,and the world will follow.

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  11. @ dr.antony

    thanks your words meant a lot. keep visiting :-D

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  12. Excellent play with words and loaded with meaning as well.

    Thanks for your thought on my blog.

    Cheers!!!

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  13. @ R. Ramesh

    Thanks :-D

    @ Asha

    Thanks for your kind words. Keep visiting. :-D

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  14. Very simple yet, deep in its message!

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  15. @ Sarah

    Thanks a lot. It meant a lot to me. Please keep visiting. :-D

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  16. It's a simple poem yet it means a lot!
    Life doesn't always give us a second chance and if you've got one, you're really lucky don't let it go !

    Hope that things get better soon !

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  17. @ Fatima

    Thanks a lot :-D and keep visiting.

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